能不能帮忙修改一下英语作文

题目

能不能帮忙修改一下英语作文
Internet plays a very important role in modern life.I always chat on the internet ,sometimes to play online games.Internet also can let us office eaiser.Internet make our life more exciting,but it’s bring some bad things.When people long time working on the computer ,or play games,will endanger people’s health.And it wasn't that people who were already feeling bad spent more time on the Internet,but that using the Net actually appeared to cause the bad feelings.So,Internet is bad for us?I think that this wants to see Internet use habit.As long as has good habit,can avoid the harm.Internet is a virtual space,it allows us to make many far away friends.Internet like a double-edged sword,bring us convenient at the same time,more for us students brought many hidden trouble.
把一些不通还有语法错误的地方修改一下,写得比较混乱,希望能整理一下,这篇东西要200字,写到那里就写不下去了,

答案

Internet plays a very important role in our modern life.I always chat on the internet and sometimes play online games.Internet also can make our office eaiser,but it brings some bad things too.When people work on the computer or play games for long time,it will endanger people’s health.And it isn't people that have already felt bad to spend more time on the Internet,but using the Net actually appears to cause the bad feelings.So,is Internet bad for us?I think it refers to people's habit of using the Internet.As long as he has a good habit,he can avoid the harm.Internet is a virtual space,it allows us to be far away from our friends.Internet is like a double-edged sword.It brings convenience to us,and brings many hidden troubles for us students at the same time.