Thank you note 纠错

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Thank you note 纠错
Dear Life,
Thanks for your variety and creativity that produces such a reality thing.I appreciate your deglighted part which makes me feel happy.However,I am much more grateful for those difficult part what teaches me lessons and helps me to grow up.Going through all those you give to me,I act much more like a mature adult and learn more things.Thanks again and I'll keep a heart of thanking for you!
Love,
XXX

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Dear Life,
Thanks for your variety and creativity that produces such a reality thing. I appreciate your deglighted part which makes me feel（去掉feel） happy. However, I am much more grateful for those difficult part what （what 改为that）teaches me lessons and helps me to grow up. Going through all those you give to （去掉to）me, I act much（去掉much） more like a mature adult and learn more things. Thanks again and I'll keep a heart of thanking （thanking改为thanks）for you!
Love,
XXX