改雅思大作文,谢谢!

题目

改雅思大作文,谢谢!
题目：
International tourism has become a huge industry in the word . Are the problems that international travelers cause greater than the advantages they bring?
Given reason for you answer.
正文:
International travelers , one of outcomes in the process of global communication, have tremendous influences on human society in contemporary today. Because of the increasing of international tourism , the issue that whether it benefits world or not ignite public debate . Although international tourists may involve demerits to some extent . The positive impacts they caused can not be ignored .
It is beyond question that a few of travelers with little morality could result in immense drawbacks. Because of little sense of conservation ,they may pollute local environment . Not only do they do harm to natural resource , but also have negative effects on historical resorts. They write their names on old temples or draw several pictures in old towers. Further more ,the

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这样大概没人会改的吧 我试过~后来还是看到网上有卖写作卡的 买了张可以改6次 那个新奇雅思学校 还不错~