The computer is widely used in education and some people think teacher do not play important role in

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The computer is widely used in education and some people think teacher do not play important role in the classroom.To what extent do you agree.
Technology is advancing at a staggering rate especially in terms of computers.It is not uncommon that most people in urban areas have their own computers,which is uesd to e-mail,surf the internet,study,etc.some people stick to thinking that computers is paly an dominat role in our life even can replace teachers in the class.I totally disagree this view.
Students are taught by teachers is a basic form in school.Even though our life is full of the proliferation of computers,they cannot be the replacement of teachers.Moreover ,computers are machines witch do not have any emotion.However,teachers can teach students with vivid knowledge like talk shows that interst students.Under no circumstasnce that students have ethusiasm when faced with cold machines.More specifically,if every student in class is allocated a computer,he / she may play co

答案

you make many mistakes in the use of vocabulary and punctuation.The grammar and structure have a little problem,more or less.I suggest that you could take participation into a course,such as the intensive class for ielts(NOS) ,if the left time for you to prepare for this examination is not much limited .BTW ,what score is enough for you?the framework used in a article is very wkward.Don`t choose it,my advice.