Who can help me to modify my article.

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Who can help me to modify my article.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I got shock with your absurd accusation when I read your letter.
Firstly,I'm not able to smoke for asthma so I hate smoking in anywhere.
Secondly,I don't know who saw me to not wear shoes.I'm not used to nothing on my feet in public.
Finally,I hope you'd better confirm who breaks this rules and regulations in gym as soon as possible.
Best regards,
David.

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Dear Sir or Madam,I got shocked（shock错了） by your absurd accusation when I read your letter.Firstly,I can not（can't 好点） smoke because of asthma and I hate smoking （anywhere前不要in ）anywhere....