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我写了一篇英语文章,请帮忙看一下语法有无错误.
The cold night,the pedestrians on the road a few,most of the early home for Christmas with my family.Only a few people on the road in a hurry to get home.Nobody noticed the is,in the corner there is a flimsy clothes,hands the little match girl,was trembling to the pedestrian to sell matches.She was extremely cold,and sleepy and hungry.But she could not go home,because the match hasn't sold out,if this time to go home,her mother will be very angry,and even hit her.She leaned against the wall,unable to stand,very disappointed.She is too tired,lying in the snow would like to have a rest.A dream that she met her many years not to see the grandmother,she is so kindly,girls seem to hear her call.She can't sleep,but her body was not her control,she was desperate,desperate yourself sad ending.Then,in a fairy and happened to see this scene,fairy is sympathize with the little girl,she really wanted to help the little girl.Then,she waved his magic wand,the moment,the little girl 's feet appeared a beautiful wooden box,girl curiously opened the box,which filled with gold.She is extremely happy,tried to hold the box to the home direction.After returning home,the girl found there was nobody in the house,was wondering,sounded a knock at the door.She opened the door,was her grandmother and mother,she pleased and surprised.Since then,the girl and her family were happy for a lifetime.

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The cold night,a few pedestrians were on the road ,most of the early home for Christmas with my family.there were Only a few people on the road to get home hurrily.Nobody noticed the case,in the corner there was a flimsy clothes,handing the little match girl,was trembling to the pedestrian to sell matches.She was extremely cold,sleepy and hungry.But she could not go home,because the match hasn't sold out,if this time she went home,her mother would be very angry,and even hit her.She leaned against the wall,unable to stand,very disappointed.She was too tired,lying in the snow and would like to have a rest.she had a dream that she met her grandmother whom she didn't see many years,she was so kind,the girl seemed to hear her voice.She could't help sleeping,and her body was not her control,she was desperate,desperate yourself sad ending.Then,in a fairy and happened to see this scene,fairy is sympathize with the little girl,she really wanted to help the little girl.Then,she waved his magic wand,the moment,the little girl 's feet appeared a beautiful wooden box,girl curiously opened the box,which was filled with gold.She was extremely happy,tried to hold the box to the home directly.After returning home,the girl found there was nobody in the house,wondering,hearing a knock at the door.She opened the door,seeing her grandmother and mother,she was pleased and surprised.Since then,the girl and her family were happy for a lifetime.