菜鸟写了个短文 请语法高手分析下～

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菜鸟写了个短文 请语法高手分析下～
我写了个短文 请语法高手分析下帮改下看那有不对的地方吗?I like reading in my spare time.Because the reading book has many advantages.First of all,I can learn a lot of knowledge of such knowledge in life is not easy experience.For example,some of the geographic areas very far,we have learned through reading can be.reading history book we could find ourselves back to several hundred years ago.To understand that time of life.The second reading to temper my eloquence.Eloquence only good for the future work and life are very helpful.The third reading is generally not feel tired.Unlike other hobbies may also be affected.In short,I like reading in the spare time .

答案

I'd love to read when I have spare time because of the advantages it brings to me.For instance (例如）,I can learn a lot of knowledge through reading rather than experiencing; there's no time or space limits - so I can travel to any geographic areas which I'm interested in.
We can always learn lessons when we are reading.Even we can go back to hundreds of years ago to see their culture,language,and so forth.
The second reason for reading is to strengthen my eloquence.People tend to be extensive in knowledge; it's always important for our future - whether for our job or daily life.Unlike other hobbies,reading is a relax.Sometimes we can hide ourselves away from our real world and to enjoy.
To conclude,reading is so much important,I love reading.The most important thing is to breathe,then is to read.
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