帮忙修改下我的英语哈,题目是《Smoking should be banned in all public areas》

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帮忙修改下我的英语哈,题目是《Smoking should be banned in all public areas》
《Smoking should be banned in all public areas》
I strongly believe that smoking should bebanned in all public areas
Why?
Because smoking is aof wastes money as well as affects our health and peoplewho have asthma can be harmed or even killed if they want to take a walk in thepark and if smoking was banned,then heart-related illnesses could possiblylower just like it did in the places where it was banned.I wouldn’t like towalk past a smoker that has a cigarette in his mouth because I wouldn’t like tobreath in the smoke and Second-hand smoke is just as bad as smoking.So I wishsmoking was banned.

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