求英语作文,语法别错.

题目

求英语作文,语法别错.
根据中文和英文提示词语,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文.所给英文提示词语仅供选用,请不要写出你的真实校名和姓名.74.生活中会有很多经历令我们感动,它们源于亲人、源于老师、源于同学、源于陌生人„„,它们冲刷着我们的心灵,激励我们向上.现在,某英文报纸就“感动”话题征文,请你投稿.发表你的观点,叙述一次让你 感动的经历,并谈谈你的体会.提示词语：moving experiences；in our daily life；
根据中文和英文提示词语,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文.所给英文提示词语仅供选用,请不要写出你的真实校名和姓名.74.生活中会有很多经历令我们感动,它们源于亲人、源于老师、源于同学、源于陌生人„„,它们冲刷着我们的心灵,激励我们向上.
现在,某英文报纸就“感动”话题征文,请你投稿.发表你的观点,叙述一次让你 感动的经历,并谈谈你的体会.
提示词语：moving experiences；in our daily life；help；remember；be deeply moved；
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答案

I have had many moving experiences in my life, and the most impressive thing I remebered was how my father took care of me when I was seriouly ill once.
it happened when i was only nine years old. i got a fever at night. My parents took me to the nearest clinic as quickly as possible. it was a cold winter night. As we were hurry, we forgot to take a thick coat for me. My father took off his coat to protect me from coldness and carried me on his back to hurry to the clinic quickly. I was deeply moved at that time. At that moment, i thought when i grow up, I must take care of them to repay them.