英语作文修改错误多多,

题目

英语作文修改错误多多,
The intended meaning of the photo above is pressing and far –reading .As is vividly depicted in the drawing,there is a big hotpot ,with lots of culture elements in it,such as Buddhism,Taoism,Confucianism,benevolence,etiquette.The caption indicates that the culture hotpot is both delicious and nutritious.
The purpose of the picture is to show us that due attention has to be paid to the cultural exchange.We must recognize that the cultural exchange do great value to our society .During the cultural exchange ,we can learn lots of things from home and aboard,for example,we can learn the IT technologies ,so we can make our lives better.And if we lost this chance ,our competition in the world will be on the ropes .So this things should be treated seriously .
As far as I am concerned ,three effective measures must be immedia tely taken to pull through the crisis.To begin with the government should issue powerful policies to encourage the society to do the good things .

答案

benevolence,etiquette 改为benevolence and etiquette
due attention 改为 due to attention
the cultural exchange do 改为 the cultural exchange does have
aboard,for 改为 aboard.For
this things 改为 these things
the the least 去掉一个the