帮忙看看这几句英语对不对.

题目

帮忙看看这几句英语对不对.
这是我作文里的几句,不敢确定对不对,请高手帮忙看看有没有什么语法错误,若有,清指出并作讲解,
1.It is more interesting that seeing the film .And the film may make things simply to understang.(这句的问题就是that后面只加名词可以吗；和后半句中make的用法对不对)
2.Theoriginal work is picked out through time goes by.
3.I am a boy of 16 years old.

答案

1.不能用that, and 是连词,不能作为一句话的开头, make 后加不带to的不定式,所以应该是：It is more interesting to see the film, and the film may make things simly understand.2. 应该用as, 不能用through, 把a...