帮我看看这句子是不是病句,

题目

帮我看看这句子是不是病句,
Aunt,you buy me shoes I received,shoes are very nice,thank aunt.With aunt's efforts,I will study harder.

答案

有吧时态错误buy 改为bought .shoes应该说a pair of shoes 还有thank aunt没有这样的说法吧我认为扩充一下thanks,my aunt .
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