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I am eager to take accounting as my major in the USA.
Because my parents are both accountants,and my father is a Certified Public Accountant of China,who runs a Public accounting firm.Under the influence of my father,I have been extremely interested in accounting since my childhood.attracted by those mysterious and magic figures.
For the other thing,I am good at math and Mathematical Statistics in my early age,which is an advantage for studying accounting.
As far as I know,In the world of economic globalization and frequent innovation of the economic activities of modern society,The accounting displays greatly affects in the modern economic development,regardless of to enterprise's management also market resources disposition,the accounting information hasthe significant influence to the policy-maker.
It cannot be denied that the role played by accountancy is more and more significant with the development of economy in the world
In particular,With China's accession to the WTO and the rapidly development of economic.There will be an increasingly great demand for accountants in the following two decades.
The United States of America is the most economically developed countries of the world.That is why almost all of the well-known public accounting firm,such as KPMG and ERNST&YOUNG,come from the USA.To meet with international standards and learn The most advanced knowledge of accounting,include accounting,Auditing,Economic Law etc.The advanced teaching method,the beautiful teaching environment,the friendly people,the good teachers.All of these attracted me deep .So I choose the United States of America as the ideal country to study accounting
I am keen to be a USCPA after my graduation.Not only because it is a decent job,but also it is the way to achieve the goal of my life----set up a Public accounting firm which can compared with Deloitte&WEF,KPMG,Price waterhouse coopers ect…
In conclusion,I do believe I can succeed on studying accounting with unlimited confidence and enthusiasm.

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I am eager to take accounting as my major in the USA.
Because my parents are both accountants and my father is a Certified Public Accountant of China,who runs a Public accounting firm.Under the influence of my father,I have been extremely interested in accounting since my childhood and attracted by those mysterious and magic figures.
For the other thing,I am good at math and Mathematical Statistics in my early age,which is an advantage for studying accounting.
As far as I know,in the world of economic globalization and frequent innovation of the economic activities of modern society,the accounting displays great affects on the modern economic development,regardless of to enterprise's management also market resources disposition,the accounting information has the significant influence to the policy-maker.
It cannot be denied that the role played by accountancy is more and more significant with the development of economy in the world,in particular,with China's accession to the WTO and the rapid development of economy.There will be an increasingly great demand for accountants in the following two decades.
The United States of America is one of the most economically developed countries of the world.That is why almost all of the well-known public accounting firms,such as KPMG and ERNST&YOUNG,come from the USA.I want to meet with international standards and learn the most advanced knowledge of accounting,include Accounting,Auditing,and Economic Law etc.The advanced teaching method,the beautiful teaching environment,the friendly people,and the good teachers attract me deeply.So I choose the United States of America as the ideal country to study accounting.
I am keen to be a USCPA after my graduation.Not only because it is a decent job,but also it is the way to achieve the goal of my life – to set up a public accounting firm which can be compared with Deloitte&WEF,KPMG,Price waterhouse coopers etc…
In conclusion,I do believe I can succeed in studying accounting with unlimited confidence and enthusiasm.
修改了很多地方,但几个专有名词我不懂行.另外,regardless of to enterprise's management also market resources disposition这一段不知你要表达什么.