麻烦各位帮忙检查一下这篇文章的语法错误,

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麻烦各位帮忙检查一下这篇文章的语法错误,
Since the population is rising dramatically these days,many people start to believe that we have to exploit more land to satisfy various kinds of needs from our people,even when the exploitation may be at the expense of animals,especially endangered animals.However,I strongly disagree with this point of view for mainly two reasons that I will outline below.
First of all,it is really cruel for us to deprive animals of their homeland just because we may need to use it.I always believe that all the lives in the nature are equal,if we make other species extinct merely for our own sake,we are bound to regret for what we have done someday.For example,due to the serious destruction of bamboo forest,the panda which we regard as the national treasure of China is increasingly dying out.What’s more,in order to prevent pandas from extinction we have to make a great effort,such as rebuild the bamboo forest and breed pandas artificially,and these kinds of works cost a gr

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第一段中especially 后加上of, 另外for mainly two reasons改为mainly for two reasons. 第二段中in the nature应该去掉the,另外such as rebuild the bamboo forest and breed pandas artificially中,后面的2个动词...