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In terms of university education, some people claim that there are too much theoretical classes. Instead, they insist that the practical courses should weigh more in college education which definitely will benefit students. I agree with this argument totally and the arguments are presented below.
Certainly, theories and principles are quite important in any education. They are precious heritages of scientific and empirical findings and conclusions from our ancestors. Based on the forerunners’ achievements, people nowadays could proceed with the development of science and other knowledge and contribute our society significantly. Besides, it is neither possible nor necessary for us to do all the exercises or experiments by ourselves. Therefore, theoretical knowledge is vital for young people to learn and master.
However, could students learn those principles, formulas, methodologies etc easily as expected? Honestly no. As we know about, theoretical knowledge

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没有单词错误,语句较为流畅,思路清晰,主体分两段来写的.
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