|correct the mistakes in the composition|

题目

|correct the mistakes in the composition|
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[1] As my sincere friends left,I'm now really very fear.
[2] I'm afraid of the changes in my mind,my temperament and behavior.
[3]Most of the people around me now is quiet senseless,even silly.
[4]I terribly feel that I'm short of imagination all the more.
[5]My courage seems have to be forgotten for a long time.
[6]Yeh...its the age of perplexity.Maybe I'm on the wrong path.
[7]I just want to take everything eazy.
[8]But I have some responsibility that I shouldn't,also couldn't abandon.
[9]I will continue doing my way,without any more thinking.
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请挑出这九句的语法错误,和语句不流畅之処{用词意思不够贴切或者语句表达太绕的},并改正.
注：[9]想表达的是：「我将继续 做我的事/走我的道路/行从我的方式,不去想太多/不去做多余的思考」

答案

1.第一名的话,really和very可去掉其中一个,典型的chinglish,真的很害怕.2.可以去掉第二个my3.is 改成are4.加上评语I5.改为seems to have been forgetten6.Its改为It's7.如果不是easy拼错了的话,试着改everything 为 ...