英语大神进!急~

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英语大神进!急~
这是我写的英语作文,学校要.哪位大神帮我看看有没有语法错误,有的话帮我改一下,谢谢啦~很急的~
My Big Family
Do you like your family?Most people will say“Of course”.Your family will make you happy when you feel upset.So is my family.It’s really big but warm enough.There are eight people in my family. I’m glad to let you know them.
My grandfather is a brave political instructor before.He left many scars from the army.He has dug in many caves.When he told me these things,he always smiled.Now,one of the caves he dug in open to the tourists.He wrote an article about this cave and sent it to the company.He also have the studens all over the China.Some of them usually call him up.And some of them usually visit him.He is popular before,isn’t he?
My grandma cooks very well.Her education isn’t very good but she is a really good grandma.She quitted her job to look after me when I was very young.I thaked her a lot.
My father is a fireman before.But now,he is a officer.He becomes fatter and fatter.So,he persis

答案

1,He left many scars from the army.是说为战争留下伤痕.改成 he has got scars from the army. ,2,Now,one of the caves he dug in open to the tourists要用被动,洞是被开放的,用完成时比较好,强调影响.改成 one ...