看我的英语写的对不对,内容是在下面.哪里不对请帮我改正.

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看我的英语写的对不对,内容是在下面.哪里不对请帮我改正.
内容：养蜜蜂是有趣的工作,每个人都有自己的爱好,有些人喜欢狗,有些人喜欢蜘蛛.我们可以养很多动物如果我们有足够的时间或我们真的很喜欢他们.但对于不喜欢养动物的人来说即使有时间和很多钱,他们也不会去养.
I think manages bee is a interesting job.Everyone have personal hobby.somebody like have a dog,somebody like have a spider.We can have a lot of animals if we have enough time or we really like them.but for people who don't like animals,Even if they have much money or have enough time they will not raise animals.
本人语法不太好，请大侠们改正

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I think raise bee is very interesting.Everyone has hobby.Some like dog,and some like spider.We can raise a lot of animals if we have enough time or we really like them.But they don't keep animals for the people who don't like it ever if they have enough time and much money.
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