英语小句子纠错

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英语小句子纠错
呵呵,本人在写memo.但是因为我的语法和用词不是太好,希望大侠们帮小弟批改批改,
Through the reading of war of words regarding the carbon dioxide emissions,the perception of organizational social responsibility rised in my mind.It includes three major perspectives that illustrate three different ways of how the organization could be involved in organizational social responsibility.

答案

words about war
regarding to
Through the reading of war of words regarding the carbon dioxide emissions,the perception of organizational social responsibility rised in my mind 从句主语与主句主语不一致,是病句.
主句应该改为：I aroused my perception of .