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大家帮我看看我这作文的句型,大小写等有没有问题呀
My E-pal
I was 12 when I learned how to use Internet to chat.My first e-friend called Jim.
He is English.He is also a middle shool student.He is kind and friendly.I learn a lot from him.I am happy him.
Such as how to send E-mail and how to use the Internet in my study.Most important we often chat in Enlish.With his help my English improves very quickly.And I can type very fast now.I like my net friend very much.

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1.My first e-friend is called Jim.2.He is English.He is also a middle school student.3.I can learn a lot from him,such as how to send E-mail and how to use the Internet in my study.这样写较好4.Most im...