求高手修改雅思作文

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求高手修改雅思作文
I do agree with the statement that happiness plays a crucial part in out lives,if a life without happiness ,it is a life without the true meaning.
However,different people standardize happiness in different perspectives.Some regard money as everything,while many others treasure families much.Although people’s attitudes toward happiness vary,I could draw some common factors,which contribute to happiness.
To begin with,I think families are indispensable.Home offers shelters from storm,when we face setbacks along our way or sometimes even feel lost,families would take the initiative to offer helps and back us up without regrets.As for myself,I failed in the College Entrance Examination,it were my parents who helped me go through this darkness,and I am quite grateful for having such supportive parents.
Furthermore,a healthy body condition should not be left.As we all know,a body,which is physically and mentally healthy,is the main capital to achieve success.There

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