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初中英语口试演讲稿,帮忙检查下有没有什么错误~
An unforgettable weekend
I had an unforgettable weekend last month.
That Saturday was Christmas Day.Lois,George,Halie and I decided to go out of the school and celebrate the Christmas Day.
At about 8:00 am,we got a ride to KFC and had a breakfast.The food was delicious.Then we went to a movie.The movie is called “The Orphan of Zhao”It was about a historical story,and we all thought this movie was very touching.After that,we had a lunch.
In the afternoon,we took a taxi to the West Lake.Maybe because of the Christmas Day,many things were more expensive than usual.We enjoyed the scenery in a small boat and then walked along the lakeside.
Finally,we returned by bus at about 6:30pm.At the end of the day,we said Merry Christmas to the sky and everyone.
It was the first time that we go out of the school and have fun by ourself.Although it was not very perfect and we faced many problems.That weekend was still one of the most unforgettable wee

答案

第三行The Christmas Day.go out of school.
第七行thought改为said更合适.
第八行应该是on a boat.
最后一段还是go out of school.ourselves.后面one of the most后加复数.
不一定完整,