Shenyang ’sWinter

题目

Shenyang ’sWinter
My favorite season is winter.It lasts from December to the next year’s February.It is the coldest season in the year.In winter,the days are very short.When it comes ,the leaves fall from the trees.Although winter means cold weather,I love it all the same.I think winter is a beautiful season,especially when it snows.Snowflakes fall down naughtily.They fall on branches of trees,on roofs of houses and on wheat fields.Soon the whole earth will be dressed in white.Everything is shining in the sun.Every time it snows,I will remember an old saying," Winter has come,can spring be far away ”
This year's winter,I came to study courses in Shenyang.Shenyang’s winter is colder than my hometown,because of its more northerly location of some.Although the outside is cold,I am happy to meet many students and teachers.We are discussing together studies the content,the atmosphere is harmonious and warm,completely has forgotten the outside coldness.I like my school,likes me teacher,likes me schoolmates,likes Shenyang's winter.
我想写沈阳的冬天,不太会写.

答案

第一段不错.第二段：This winter,I came to study in Shenyang.Shenyang's winter is colder than my hometown,because of its location.Although it's cold outside,I am happy because I stay with many students ...