英语作文 第一次写 有任何错请大家找出来 然后帮我改正 还要写语法错在哪好吗

题目

英语作文 第一次写 有任何错请大家找出来 然后帮我改正 还要写语法错在哪好吗
Long long time ago ,A babe came into the world.A young man and a young women were very happy.Because they have just a son.They are not awere of the babe will be a trublemaker.in fact,that babe is me.
I am use to cut school with my diehard followers playing compurter game when i am in junior middle school.My parent always scolds me,disrelish me study is bad.
now,I am nineteen.I found my hobby.I don't care what they say.I have been the only constant desire.
准备明年中下旬出国 但是英语太烂
- -从头开始来吧 多给点建议

答案

错误多了就改不起了：
A long,long time ago,...