求英语大神帮忙修改一下错误,谢谢啦~

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求英语大神帮忙修改一下错误,谢谢啦~
Lanzhouwill meet a short tourist off-season from next week
After a busy summer vacation, the surge oftourists crowd in the airport and railway station gradually eased. From nextweek, a short tourist off –season in September will come to railway、highway and civil aviation.
Before National Day, the tickets from thetrains which start from Lanzhou station are enough, even some of them can notbe sold out. The price of air tickets will have one or two discount in Zhongchuanairport; at the mean time, the tourist routes’ price may have a slight decline.But during National Day, the railway、highway and civil aviation will have a busy time. Boththe local route and the remote route will meet another peak.
Therefore, it is a good time for citizens totake a trip during the ten days.Though,as the weather turns cool and a largetemperature difference day and night, citizens must pay attention to keep warm.

答案

错的太多了吧,很多标点符号都用错了 ,还有些句子没有了介词.还有很多语法问题.例如这个句子 But during National Day,the railway、highway and civil aviation will have a busy time 用BUT作一个句子的开头10个老...