英语短文改错!急用!1

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英语短文改错!急用!1
It's nearly midnight in the big city,but the big city is not asleep.There are many people in the street.Some are strdling with their friends,some are selling kinds of goods and some are eathing dilicious food.That the noise from the street and the light from the resturant,the shop and the building's window add up many people forms a vivid picture about the large city's night.It is charm of the large city.
Soon it's morning in the big city,the transportation is crowded.It's time to go to work,so many people want to jam the bus in order to get to work-place on time.Some people only eat a piece of mead or drink a cup of coffee and others even eat nothing at home.They are waiting for the bus in hurry.In truth,most of them go to work-place by bike,it is even quicker than bus when it have a bad traffic jam.
In short,a large city always too noise to make people feel calm.As a matter of fact,we often believe that a large city never sleeps.

答案

It's nearly midnight in the big city, but the big city is not asleep.
It's nearly midnight in a big city, which is not asleep.
There are many people in the street. Some are strdling with their friends, some are selling kinds of goods and some are eathing dilicious food.
Many people are still in the street. Some are strolling with their friends, some are selling kinds of different goods to pass-bys and some are still enjoying their dilicious food in restaurants by street.
That the noise from the street and the light from the resturant, the shop and the building's window add up many people forms a vivid picture about the large city's night.
The busy cars, crowded pedestrians, shops and restaurants present a vivid picture of the city that is still not sleep.
It is charm of the large city.
Life in such a large metropolitan is charming.
Quickly it's morning again and another starts.the transportation is crowded. It's time to go to work, so many people start to line up for trams and buses in order to get to work-place on time. Some people only eat a piece of mead or drink a cup of coffee and others even eat nothing at home.
They are waiting for the bus in hurry.
They quickly go to the railway station or bus stop.
In truth (fact), most people go to work-place by bike, it is even quicker than bus when it have a bad traffic jam.
In short, a large city always too noise to make people feel calm. As a matter of fact, we often believe that a large city never sleeps.