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Some people think governments should spend as much money as possible exploring outer space (for example,traveling to the Moon and to other planets).Other people disagree and think government should spend this money for our basic needs on earth.Which is these two opinions do you agree with?Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
正文：
A profound changes of the modern technology has been seen in recent years.With the develop of the technology,people have created many high technological things to explore our space with the help by the government.Some people agree that this is a good idea.Meanwhile,still some deem that the government need to spend more money to people’s basic life.I agree with the former.Because technology is now playing an important part in the world.it’s worth doing it.
The government need to spend money to the technological space programme.Nowadays,the resource on earth has been decreasing with an incredible rate.It been

答案

A profound change in modern technology has been seen in recent years. For example, people have created many high technological things to explore the universe with the help of oure government. Some pe...