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Air transport is being increasingly used in exporting fruits and vegetables to countries wherein these types of produce are unavailable or not in season.Some say that this is a good thing while others feel that this use of air transport cannot be justified.Discuss
As a significant production of industry technology,air transport definitely offers the public enormous conveniences.However,it seems that air transport,especially in recent decades,is experiencing a shift from benefiting people directly to exporting fruits and vegetables to countries in which these types of produce are unavailable or not in season.In this essay,I will explore both sides of this change in the following.
The proponents of this alternation hold that the main function of the airplane is to deliver people to wherever they want,rather other applications.If there were still abundant resources to develop diverse functions of air transport,the relative organizations would adopt some effec

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