一篇很短的英语自我介绍,请大家帮我纠正一下语法错误,

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一篇很短的英语自我介绍,请大家帮我纠正一下语法错误,
good afternoon~
It is really my honor to have this opportunity for a interview,I will introduce myself briefly,i am 20 years old,born in Sichuan province ,a beautiful place of china,and i am still a sophomore student at Sichuan University Jinjiang College,my major is Environmental Art.I spend most of my time on study,i have acquired many knowledge of my major during my school time.And the School’S scholarships returned My efforts.
I think i may be a Creative thinker,when I was stady in Kindergarten,a Magazine had published my idea,so I always believe I would be a good designer.
Always something fresh can attract my attentionl,new environment ,new product ,maybe we’ll meet some problems near by,but if we keep on learning new knowledge,nothing is impossible~
France is a Famous city for romantic and artistic,as other designers,France is deeply attracted to me,If I had the opportunity to go there,I think my design capability can be Greatly improved.
Time is tightm,wish my confession will give you a good impression,thank you!
可以直接在下面回复.最好发百度短信给我.急用、!

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Good afternoon,ladies and gentlemen~!
It is really my honor to have this opportunity for this interview.I will introduce myself briefly.I am 20 years old,born in Sichuan province ,which is a beautiful place in china,and i am still a sophomore at Sichuan University Jinjiang College.My major is Environmental Art.I spent most of my time studying and have acquired most of the knowledge of my major during school time,and the scholarships returned My efforts.
I think i am a Creative guy since Kindergarten,and had published an idea in Magazine.I always believe I could be a good designer.
Always,I'm attracted by something fresh,like new environment ,new product.Maybe I'll meet some problems in the near future,but nothing is impossible only if we keep on learning~!
France is a Famous country for its romantic and artistic culture.As other designers,France is also attractive to me.If I had the opportunity to be there,I think my design capability will be greatly improved.
Thank you for your attention!
最后的confession就免了吧……