七年级英语作文看看有错吗?

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七年级英语作文看看有错吗?
It was sunny.My school went to the QianLing park yesterday.The trip was excellent.We were very happy
We went to the park by bus.When we arrived the park.Flowers were dancing and birds were singing.We ate some foods and played games under some trees.At last,we had to go home
My school trip was interesting

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It was sunny.My schoolmates went to the Qianling park yesterday.The trip was excellent.We were very happy. We went to the park by bus.When we arrived at the park.Flowers were dancing and birds were si...