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Technology,students' helper or not?
Nowadays,the advanced technology has widely come to almost every corner and it is unrealistic to avoid the technology in modern societies.A great number of new technologies have been researched every year particularly in IT industry.Also,students are consequently benefiting from some of the technologies which are specially designed.On the other hand,we should be cautious because the technology can also be negative sometime with its rapid advancement.
We have to thank the technology developed to help us,especially us students as it can be utilized to solve difficult and annoying problems and to learn entirely new things.For example,3 years ago,we were able to use MSN just by sending instant messages and now,it is available for us to share videos,leave messages even when we are not online and its windows become more and more user-friendly.Therefore,it can be concluded that we can communicate with others more and more conveniently without the worry of distance and time.Technology is definitely the key to the success for most inquisitive students who are crazy about inventions and creation as a variety of software is capable to be used to design models and create images.
However,technology can also be detrimental if it is used unwisely and improvidently.First,we can depend on it too much.The students who are not very confident about their school work may turn their attention to the technologies which can help them overwhelm the difficulties whose job is supposed to improve the students' ability to study and communicate.We still need conversations face to face and we also have to imagine how the vectors can come to a completely single structure in mathematics problems.Second,we should also understand the negative effects which technology will bring us.For example,the Internet technology can bring us the most useful information in most circumstances while false and unhealthy information can also be released by those who want to break the atmosphere of the true value for our society maliciously.
In conclusion,the students should consider the question about whether they really need the technology as their helper discreetly before they take action so that they can utilize the technology most efficiently while the technology itself will not jeopardize them.

答案

写的挺好的,评分的话不好说,但以现在托福的标准的话,应该不错吧,不过建议你不用刻意写长句,比如the students should consider the question about whether they really need the technology as their helper discreetly before they take action so that they can utilize the technology most efficiently while the technology itself will not jeopardize them.这句话意思就不大清楚