初三的英语作文求修改

题目

初三的英语作文求修改
呃,老师要检查作文啊,大家帮我改改吧.我一句一句的分开打,大家多指出点错啊
英语不好,句子都是轻给里喜.一句一句凑上的.
要求：简单介绍一下你认为最有用的发明（包括其发明的时间及用途,80字以上）
1.The most useful invention to me ---computer
2.I think the most useful invention is the computer.It was invented in 1976 by American.
3.The first computer was big and difficult to operated,It was only used for couting the numbers.
4.Now computers becomes smaller and smaller.Internet makes people communicate with each other easiler,also people could watch movies or listen to music on the internet.
5.We can study on the computer.
6It makes learning more confortable,students will have great interest in learning by computers.

答案

3 difficult to operated把operated改为operate
4 becomes smaller and smaller把becomes改为become