这篇英语作文有什么地方需要修改

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这篇英语作文有什么地方需要修改
Certificate Craze
Nowadays there is a "certificate craze" on campus .Thousands of college students are keen on working for various certificate,such as CET Band 4 and Band 6 certificates,Business English Certificate,and other different professional certificates.
But why is there such a craze Different people have different opinions about this .Some people think if you have enough certificate ,you will get a decent job and make more money.While others just want to prove themselves by working for a certificate .They have been interested in a certain field and have worked hard on it,so they want a certificate to justify their efforts.
In my opinion ,I think the certificate craze is good for both the society and students.And a certificate can reflect one's ability in some degree .There are too many people in China,and the pressure to have employment is greater than before ,if you have some certificate such as English ,computer skills.It is good for you to find a job ,it is an advantage
In the end ,a certificate is the mark of ability .and I think we should take a positive view and study to get some certificates.

答案

挺好的,注意一下语态就行了