英语高手看过来~帮忙检查一下有没有语法、单词的问题啊.（文章在下面）

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英语高手看过来~帮忙检查一下有没有语法、单词的问题啊.（文章在下面）
Good morning,teachers.it's my honor to stand here introducing myself.My name is xxx and my English name is xxx.I’m 12 years old.I’m from Class x Garde x of experimental Primarry School.
I'm a lively and confident girl.I like drowing pictures 、reading books and singing songs.My favorite sports is running、jumping and swimming.And I run fast.
Now let me introduce my study.I like English very much.I think it is interesting .I also like Maths,and painting
And next let me talk about my family.There are three people in my family.They are my father,my mother and me.We are a happy family.I love my parents.
Thanks for you listen to me.

答案

写的很好,就这样就好.下面给你几个建议：

Good morning,teachers ——> Good morning, Teachers and my fellow students

I like drowing pictures 、reading books and singing songs ——> I like drawing, reading and singing

Now let me introduce my study ——> Now let me talk about my study.

Thanks for you listen to me ——> Thanks you for listening to me.