英语日记

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英语日记
Through nearly two month-long university lives,let me anew know the university life.The university life does not look like such leisurely and carefree which in the novel writes,also does not look like in the high school life that kind to constrain.It is in the life an important turning point.Let us anew realize to own value.The university an own big stage what lets us demonstrate.Thinks before pays the labor and the fatigue,the university richly colorful life lets us anew have the self-confidence.I have a dream.And I believed that my university life can be happier.
I must to strive!And I believe myself!
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During nearly two-month's university life(through该成during,表示在..期间,two-month中间要加—,Life表示生活,单数）, it made me know what the university life is.The university life doesn't look like so l...