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英语改错改下
Around the world more and more people are taken part in dangerous sports and activities.Of course,there have always been people have been looking for adventurous.They look for an immediately pleasure from a dangerous activity as that may last only a few minutes or even secondp.For example,bungee jumping is considered as a good example of such a activity.You jump from a high place about 200 meters above the ground in a rope tied to your ankles.You fell at up to150kilometers an hour until the rope finally

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错误的地方我用大写单词来表示：
1.there have always been people WHO have been looking for ADVENTURES.
2.They look for an IMMEDIATE pleasure from a dangerous activity THAT may last only a few minutes or even seconds
3..For example,bungee jumping is considered as a good example of such AN activity.
4.You jump from a high place about 200 meters above the ground WITH a rope tied to your ankles.
5.You FALL at up to150kilometers an hour until the rope finally