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帮我把这篇文章翻译成英文吧,拜托了,请不要拿翻译机器,最好能口语化些
我是一个来自中国的19岁学生,我现在很激动也很兴奋,当我决定写这样一封信给您.我很喜欢苹果的产品,因为它们真的很令人着迷.不过我现在要说的是iphone,iphone的设计堪称完美但仍有不足,就是关于屏幕的一个小小的问题,当人们使用iphone时,常常会沾上令人厌烦的污渍,这严重影响iphone的屏幕效果,尤其是在打电话时,最容易被使屏幕沾上一脸的油渍,真的很令人尴尬.对此我有一个主意,就是把XXX取消,放在后盖,把xx内置在数据线接口,后盖可改用抗油腻的材料,我觉得可以参考荷叶.下面是我做的简单的设计图.

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I am a 19-year-old student in China.I`m very excited to write this letter. I love iphones because they are so charming. But now I want to say ,the design of iphones is nearly perfect .,but I think there is a small problem about the screen. When we are using the iphones ,it is easy to blot the screen and it will influence the effect. Espectially when we are on the phone , the screen is easy to get the grease stain .As for this problem ,I have an idea. I think cancel the in the data line interface. I think the stuff can use the special material which can avoid the dust. I think the lotus leaf may be OK,The following is my simple design.