一篇英语作文,修改

题目

一篇英语作文,修改
Spring is coming ,I am very happy ,spring is my favorite season ,because snow become water ,the day is bcome long ,and the trees is become green ,I can play soccer ,fly the kites and run with my friends I also can ride my new bike.It sounds great .I love spring!
有没有语法问题,有的话请指出,

答案

because snow become water 改为because the snow melt down
the trees is become green改为the trees are becoming green
,I can play soccer ,fly the kites and run with my friends I also can ride my new bike.改为
,I can play soccer ,fly the kites ,run with my friendsand I can also ride my new bike.
中间再做一些断句