指点语法错误,The digital age

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指点语法错误,The digital age
作文标题是:The digital age ,我写了一小段,求指点语法错误,
The digital products have changed the way of our work ,education and life ultimately(还是用completely) ,At first,due to the appear of the computer,many positions such as:book keepers,typists have been disappeared.At the same time,the postions relate to the computer have increased rapidly.
The second aspects,the way we spend our leisure life has changed a lot.We can play ipad after dinner or on our way to work,we can chat with our firend anytime through the smart mobilephone ,we can study english by the mobile phone software.
It is hard to imagine that a life without digital products now.Admit or not ,digital products have altered our daily life.

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