这几句英文哪些错误的地方?

题目

这几句英文哪些错误的地方?
Dear Editor
Can you help me?My mum is cruel with me and I couldn't stand her any longer.She shouts at me and force me to study all the time without some rest.The worst thing that happens to me is that she beats me with anything,his hands,feet shoes and a broom,I still remember once she pulled lots of hairs off my head.I am stressed everyday and feel helpless.How should I do with such a mum?Looking forward to your reply soon.
Yours,
Li Ping
这是书上的改错题哈

答案

his hands,feet shoes and a broom- her hands, feet, shoes and broomyour mum is a she/her not he/himHow should I do with such a mum?- what should i do with a mum like this?