英语高手帮我修改考研作文.急

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英语高手帮我修改考研作文.急
考研看图作文
具体就是一个人站在海上的船上拿着一张票.另一个人拿着行李站在岸上看着船.
下面有一行字：机遇就像一艘不定期的船,只有准备充分的人才能上船.
As is vividly depicted in the drawing,there is a ship on the sea.One man,holding a ticket,enters into the ship.However,the other who does not have a ticket only can watch the further and further ship with unsatisfied.The caption reads,“Opportunity is like a ship which is only ready for a man with ticket.”
The artist uses this unique metaphor in order to tell us a meaningful philosophy,to make adequate prepares for chances,of life.Many famous people can always turn commonplace things to advantage,and then catch a rare chance.The most persuasive example is Jay Chou,a China-renowned pop music star.Many songs signed by him were not accepted by some stars in the early time.His boss gives him a opportunity to perform these songs by himself.Finally,he catches the chance,and succeeds.
From my perspective,it is necessary for us to make adequate preparations before opportunities c

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