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Do you agree or disagree,the best way for parents to teach children the responsibility is to let them have an animal.
When it comes to the topic that what is the best way for parents to teach children responsibility,opinions vary from person to person.Some people hold a view that taking care of an animal may be the best way to help children establish a sense of responsibility.From my point of view,however,I disagree with that opinion that each child should have an animal as no particular education method can be applied to every child,and I believe there are many other useful methods can teach children various virtues,including the responsibility.
I admit the fact that having an animal is probably a good way to teach child responsibility.In the process of taking care of a pet,children would learn how to show their love and patient; they would have chances to make food and feed their little pet,rather than only waiting mother to cook for them; they also have to le

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