求高人帮我写一个托福的作文.

题目

求高人帮我写一个托福的作文.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Some people think making sure that others (influential people or potential employers) know about your strengths and accomplishments can help you succeed,if you do not do this,you won’t have a successful life.
是否赞成一定要让别人make sure（比如有影响的人或者你的老板）知道你的strength and accomplishment才能能帮你获得成功,否则一事无成
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We live in very competitive society, this is especially relevant for callow graduates in the peregrination to employment. Many of the young graduates don't have adequate working experience, which inad...