这是一篇关于我的寒假的英文作文（将来时）请大家多多检查,睁大眼睛仔细看,有没有什么错误的地方,

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这是一篇关于我的寒假的英文作文（将来时）请大家多多检查,睁大眼睛仔细看,有没有什么错误的地方,
A Plan For My Holiday
The holiday comes,I,maked a plan for my happy holiday.
First,I will have a good rest so that I can learn better when I back to school.Second,I would be carefully in doing my homework,it's the work that the students must do it well.Third,I think I should have a good trip on holiday,it is good for my healthy.Finally,it's also the most important.I can enjoy the Spring Festival.Children will get many money.I like the holiday very much!

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The holiday comes.I want tomake a plan for my happy holiday.First ,I am going to have a good rest ,so that I can learn better when I go back to school.Second,I will doing my homework carefully .It's t...