我写的口语考试稿,不知道有什么语法问题没有,希望可以尽量简单和口语化一点

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我写的口语考试稿,不知道有什么语法问题没有,希望可以尽量简单和口语化一点
My hobby
I love ACG and how to enjoy them is what my hobby.ACG is a new word that A for animation,C for comic and G for game.When I was watch animation,reading comicor playing game feel satisfied,relaxed and happy.But every coin has two sides.Most of people thought they were waste money and time.And they would have a bad influence on students.As the point is reasonable,I don't think loving and enjoying ACG is wrong.We can make them and our study balance.That is what I am trying my best to do.I believe it will come ture.That is all,thanks.

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My hobbyI love ACG and enjoy them. ACG is a new word. A is for animation, C for comic and G for game. When I am watching animation, reading comic, or playing game, I feel satisfied, relaxed and happy....