【在线等】请帮忙检查语法错误 申请询问信

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【在线等】请帮忙检查语法错误 申请询问信
Dear sir or madam,
I am a student from China and I During my undergraduate studies,I have studied such subjects as calculus,linear algebra,probability theory,statistics,microeconomics,macroeconomics,portfolio investment,financial markets,commercial banking,international trade theory and practice,international settlement,financial management,financial accounting and management accounting etc.May I know if I am qualified to apply for the Master's Degree in Finance I would be grateful if you could also inform me of the tuition fee for per year of the Master's Degree in Finance.And which language I have to submit results and what is the specific requirements?
格式语法什么的 口吻越客气越好,

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Dear sir or madam,
I am a student from China and I'm now an undergraduate student, I have studied subjects such as calculus, linear algebra, probability theory, statistics, microeconomics, macroeconomics, portfolio investment, financial markets, commercial banking, international trade theory and practice, international settlement, financial management, financial accounting and management accounting etc.
May I know if I am qualified to apply for the Master's Degree in Finance ? I would be grateful if you could also inform me the tuition fee for (per year of) the Master's Degree in Finance.And which language I have to submit the results and what is the specific requirements?

per year of 在这里很别扭,但我不太确定