请帮我检查一下语句和语法,非常急,

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请帮我检查一下语句和语法,非常急,
Good
morning/afternoon,(ladies and gentlemen/ladies/sirs).I’m glad to meet you .
It is really a great honor to have this opportunity for this interview.I hope I can make a good performance today.First,please let me introduce myself.My name is LiXiaoyin,You can call me Anna if you like.I’m an bright,confident girl from
Yantai.I’m 14 years old.studying in NO.2 middle school.I have many hobbies,such as singing songs,drawing pictures,traveling and so on.I like blue very much,because I think blue is classical andmysterious .My favourite animal is bird.I’ve kept a parrot at my house.Birds are great,they are cute and funny.
I really enjoy traveling,which I think is the best sport in the world.I have traveled many places,and I think Guilin is the most beautiful.It’s a good place to live.The environment there was clean and the rivers and mountains looked clear.The water in Guilin was so pure that you could drink it with out boiling.I had a good time there.T

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I hope I can 第一人称多用to do一般来说blue 是calm and gentleI’ve kept a parrot at my house用现在时即可The environment there was clean 建议去there wasBirds are 伟大,巨大?boiling换成 being boiledWhat a...