检查一下简单的文章有没有语法错误

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检查一下简单的文章有没有语法错误
And I want to tell you about the famous singer Enya.
She was famous for her Irish music.Ireland is a beatiful country with long history.Enya was born on May 17,1961.At the age of 3,she performed on a stage.Then she was studying piano and classical music.At the age of seventeen,she continued her study of music at college.Now,she is famous all over the world.She’s songs are very peaceful and quiet ,like Only time,One by one May it be .You can find that she has the voices of nature.Ok,if you have time,you can enjoy her songs.
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答案

有错误的地方,我用大写字母标出来.And I want to tell you about the famous singer Enya. She IS famous for her Irish music. Ireland is a beatiful country with A long history. Enya was born on May 17, 1961...