或者可以在里面加点精彩的句子,

题目

或者可以在里面加点精彩的句子,
Ladies and Gentlemen:
Good morning!I’m very glad to be here.Today,the topic of my speech is my life,and the title is “Composes the music movement of youth hood with contribution”
After graduated from university,I gave up superiority easily and comfortably life,and to participated in a plan of our country which is Supporting New rural reconstruction,supporting education,supporting medical science and helping the poor.Many of my teacher and classmates can’t understood me extremely and ask why did you chosen like this?
I don’t want to brag about how great I was,I just want to say:if you want to be a youth aspirant,you have no choice but go to the basic level place and where your motherland and the people most need help.
Arrived at basic unit,I’m not only exercising my knowledge to works,but also learning more from cadre at the basic level and villages who are experienced.I’ll improve my comprehensive ability during living in basic,and then I can develop my ability and value in best.
And now,I’m here about one year .I can actually get touch with my improves,beside it I have seeing a beautiful scenes about New rural reconstruction .and all of this are what I can’t learn from textbooks and campus.
So,it’s my life,although sometimes I feel hardly and difficultly,I’m firmly believe a youth if he or she want to be aspirant,he (or she) have no choice,but get closely with people.
Dear friends,go to the basic level place and where your motherland and the people most need help.And Composes the music movement of youth hood with contribution.
Thanks!
有什么谚语适合我这个主题的啊？

答案

1.建议先说问候good morning,再说L & G.2.第1段改成：It's my honor to stand here delivering(/to deliver) this speech,and my topic is:……（一般不用title的,还有我觉得题目要用composing of……比较好）3.第2...