找英语高手给组合一个句子

题目

找英语高手给组合一个句子
我想把下面这些东西组合起来,
the policy of opening ot the outside world
current economic prosperity and social progress
scientific upgrading,especially the imporvement on communication and transportation
historically developed cultural tradition
本人想这样组合,不知道有没有语法错误,请高手指证,并给出更好的组合方法,
The policy of opening to the outside world led to the cultural development,social progress,economic prosperity and scientific upgrading,especially the improvement on communication and transportation.
修改请不要增加过多词汇,也不要删减过多词汇
我就想要表达,对外开放导致文化发展,社会进步,经济繁荣和科学进步,特别是在通信和运输领域的提高,这个意思
第一句是opening to,写错了
并列部分,顺序是否需要改变

答案

整句结构不错,并列成分也可以不调顺序了,以免不平衡.The open policy has led to the cultural development,social progress,economic prosperity and scientific development,especially the improvement on commun...